W.I.P. - The Stained Mirror

Edit: I'm probably gonna die coloring this. Just saying xD

Yep, I'm gonna start coloring this. I realize that there are some things off about it, like their hands, but honestly, it's my first time trying something this big (and my first time drawing any of these characters, really) and I don't think it's such a bad headstart I just hope time will make it better.

Anyways, this is the lineart of a concept picture for my story, The Stained Mirror (previously Unfaithful xD)

Characters belong to A.T.O.M., a TV animation show from some couple of years ago. 
Art by mwah *v*